After the disappearance of Fluttershy and her animals running semi-wild around the town Twilight and her friends have to round them up unable to focus to find their missing friend. Feeling bad about it and hoping she was okay the members of the Cutie Mark Crusaders; Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle go out and look for her. After reading several books about young snoops and sleuths such as Mystery Clue and the Secrets of Manehatten, Adventures of the Mystery Doo and the Mystery Gang and a few things online called “DiD Fan Fiction” The girl believed they were ready to be the Cutie Mark Crusaders Mystery Solvers in hopes to get a cutie mark in mystery solving. Their first clue was a blonde lock of somepony’s mane on Fluttershy’s rug, second was a purple bracelet they found a few feet from her door and the 3rd and final clue was this odd green mare with a blonde mane they never seen around Ponyville acting very strange always saying someone or somebody instead of somepony something that the Living Dictionary Sweetie Belle noticed.

They followed her in hopes she knew something but lost her in an old abandon house just on the outskirts of the town. The girls sneak in looking around but it was already getting late, Sweetie Belle was getting nervous. Scootaloo then started to act all macho in hopes to snap Sweetie Belle out of it while Apple Bloom found their best clue yet, a pink lock of mane was found and they were sure it was Fluttershy’s meaning she’s somewhere in this strangely large house!

Just then Sweetie Belle began to muffle loudly causing the girls to look behind them only to see that Green Mare grabbing Sweetie Belle and… Licking her Horn! An act that should never be preformed, at least not to a minor, the girls freak and start to run in hopes to get help but then are snatched by what appears to be living rope only to realize that the Mare was using magic to control it binding them tightly unable to run away! Then some dirty rags few by covering their muzzles silencing their cries for help as the rope pulls and tugs on them pulling their hooves behind their backs. Sweetie Belle watches in shock to see her friends subdued scared that she herself is helpless to do anything as this Mare continues her uninvited advances making her feel strange an confused, feelings she shouldn’t be feeling yet.

The mare just smiles, happy with her latest catch and already in the mists of another plan to ensnare her next victims! But the question is… Who will it be this time?

so tell me what you think… about the pic and my quick story :p