Rough sketch for a request for Alvaxerox on DA

Said request will be Rainbow and Spitfire having a tiff while Dash in her Lion Onesie and Spitfire in her wonderbolts uniform.  

Here’s the ‘money shot’ for the story line for this piece.  Said story line being Spitfire taking issue with how Dash wears her lion onesie instead of the oneise itself.  What you see here is Dashie’s reaction at her ‘dressing down,’ becoming a literal dressing down.  One quick zipper pull and out flop Dashie’s rainBOOBS in front of everypony.  The double nip slip a hit at that.  Something that was previewed in the first thumbnails.

Like I said in the first rough >>1917987 I needed to make a few tweaks.  Reworking the zipper was the major one.  Needed to get Spitfire’s hand in there pulling on the zipper down like it was supposed to.  Other wise the scene makes no sense with out it.  Only with an unicorn character can you get away with objects moving on their own.  The second tweak I needed to do was her teeth.  The teeth on Dashie’s upper jaw looked a little off.  So I brought the upper jaw into alignment with the lower jaw.  Doing so opened up her mouth more for a better screamy face.  The third tweak was on the part of her ear.  That left ear of her’s that shows from under the hoodie.  It looks a little out of proportion to the rest of her head.  Made it a bit wider and looks a bit better.  One final tweak I needed to do was her arms.  Those were also out of proportion to the rest of her head.  It was something didn’t notice in the first sketch.  I thinned those out a bit, and it opened up composition a lot more.  Lineart is clean enough on this that I can scan it as is.  One less scan worthy final drawing to make.  Just need to make final drawings of Spitfire >>1910538 and Dash >>1915905 roughs and then all three of these will be scanned then put together in GIMP for the final colored version.